by Nix Jun 27, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Everybody run here, |
I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this piece. The flow was sort of messy, as was the form. Usually in forms such as these (that have no precise pattern) I'm excited to read them, because sometimes the "messy" effect can really work for a poem. But I wasn't so sure about this. |
Wow..............its just wow.............oh my God that was just great no excellent! i give it a 5/5 |