Comments : Dont come near me

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, such a powerful, emotional, flawless and saddening poem. So much heartbreak portrayed. I really like the 2nd to last stanza ..
    "For this love is a weapon
    This love is a thorn
    Breaking me down
    To become broken and torn
    Don't look in the mirror
    At that shattered form" <<<< VERY powerful.
    Well written, 5/5. Em