Comments : Lustful decay

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I'm in love with the way u write ur poems....I feel like U got some thoughts like mine someway but U express them better than me..
    the flow was god and the poem was well-written..
    U rock;)..5/5..

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Some scary things you mention in your poem and very sad for such a young mind to go through things like this.A good write though as i would expect from you ,well done once more.Grant