Comments : My Darling [acrostic]

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Amazing piece
    loved it so much
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Very refreshing, Hassan. Adorable short poem. I like your romantic poem, they always make me in good mood. ;)

    I truly wish someone would call me gorgeous and pretty too... :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    This is really amazing. Short but sweet!!!!
    Keep up the good work... i liked it
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Enjoyable poem. Very sweet one... Well done!

  • Well i though it was beautiful and sweet and loving. i really loved it. she is a lucky girl.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Hassan
    What a lovely Acrostic.

    Moving to wards happiest life
    You are going to be my wife

    Starting a new chapter in life.

    Days will spend in each other arms
    Adoring, loving, life in your charms
    Real love spread its own wings to fly
    Leaving everyone, going to wards sky
    In your loving eyes there is my way
    Now the taste of love is so charming
    Gorgeous, pretty, you are my darling!

    Your love shines through your words. Very happy uplifting piece you have peened.
    Great job!
    Take care my friend
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww.. such an adorable acrostic poem. Great job! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Bailey

    What a great piece!

  • 13 years ago

    by Aveena

    Short & sweet, really great :)

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    How long its been sinceive read or wrote Acrostic poems awesome peice man really well writen

  • 13 years ago

    by catherin

    I don't have word's to say ... awesome awesome just awesome...

  • 13 years ago

    by lina jambil

    Nice -- deep love