If You Look Harder You Might See.

by Courageous Dreamer   Jun 27, 2008


-*Written for a contest.*-

Deep down inside me,
I withold countless feelings -
That I'm hesitant to express.
For the feeling of rejection is alarming.

But, boy.. if you look harder,
You might just see, a girl who likes you.
Someone who would do anything in her power,
Just to be with you for a second.

She's not despondent,
Oh no, she just likes everything about you.
Your ravishing smile gives her butterflies,
And your charisma makes her fall for you harder.

If you would just give her the consolation,
The feeling of being safe,
Maybe she would open up to you,
But until then, these feelings remain concealed.

She will not open up her heart to someone,
like you - someone who doesn't know her well.
The fear of rejection is the only thing on her mind,
She is scared to fall for you -
But if you just look harder, you may just see -
A considerate girl who just wants to be with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Love tis poem-its really well written! u gota talent neva stop writing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, I love this!! The whole poems was so enjoyable to read and you had me wanting more by the end. I loved the whole idea of it, very cute, and you wrote it so wonderfully. Take care and nice work! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Benito

    I like this poem of yours. its very good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Oh, my GOSH!!! Could I please print this out and give it to this guy that I like?!?!? lol I'm just kidding, but seriously, this poem really reminds me of "our relationship". Wow, I really liked it (I'm sure you can tell)!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww ... this is a sweet poem.. ahhhh the fear of rejection.. ive been there and still am lol. i hate to get rejected especially if the person is someone i really care about.. but if you never open up then you will never know what could have been.

    beautiful poem...

    definately 5/5

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