My Time

by X Harlea X   Jun 27, 2008


This is my time,
to play my game.
and show all of you,
all my ways.

i will kill this girl,
with one little whirl.
and just to make you all hurl,
ima tear out her insides as well.

now i'll say this again,
this is my time.
no one will reconigze,
who commited this horrible crime.

well not on my time

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Eh, I'm very picky. You'll get better though.

    For me it's like a rule to try to NEVER rhyme girl with anything, because then you have to use whirl and it never goes along with anything you're talking about.

    I know this is freestyle, but I prefer structure much more. That way the rhyming is more consistant and it flows better.

    I also wish you would have described exactly how you killed the girl. That would have been great imagery. :)

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