You're the voice inside my head.

by vintage darling   Jun 27, 2008


A world filled with perfect moments,
found only in black and white
A boy that means more to you,
one that will make everything alright

Never having to agonize consequences,
no opinions or misjudgments
A place where there's no harm,
nothing but the endearing silence

Thinking each time we know the end,
serendipity and fate spins it around
Beating hearts, filled with love,
chance of heartbreaks may resound

The promise of the moon and stars,
protection as my guardian angel
the faultless world collapsed,
A weak heart left to dangle

A world unravelling at the seams,
it wasn't always the brighter side,
where chivalry was deceased
A sensitivity washed up on the tide

The true love story is,
you never made my life grand
I was never scared, and you were never too much.
Who is it really left there to stand.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful, 5/5. Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Nice... good choice of words. keep up the good work. stay in touch and dont be a stranger. ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I like your other 2 poems better. But this one is good too. Anyway you have an error in your poem.

    A boy that means more to you,
    one that will make (always alright)
    = Everything alright *I think it would sound better - and it will flow better too*

    Keep up the good work.

  • Great poem, but it did made me stop in parts that i think i shouldn't have. over all it was well written. keep it up!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*