by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Jun 28, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Distance |
Oooh neat structure. |
Holy crap. This was extremely good. I love the rhyming, it flowed along freaking amazingly. Wowwwieee. I love how you are sharing what is going through your head. Nice work!! 5/5. |
by X Harlea X
Wow. so much emotion in here. great job jen.5/5 |