Wow. so much emotion in here. great job jen.5/5
**harlea

Holy crap. This was extremely good. I love the rhyming, it flowed along freaking amazingly. Wowwwieee. I love how you are sharing what is going through your head. Nice work!! 5/5.

Oooh neat structure.
This is very well-written.
It was short, sweet, and PERFECT.
Keep it up! 5/5

Love,
Tina