Thank you :o. I'll write more soon, I need some inspiriation XD

Wow this is a very powerful poem. ive never read anything like it. i loved it! great job. keep up the good work!

Thanks :D. I have a few more ideas I'm still trying to find out how to put it into words though.

This is really sad. im sorry.
its very good tho. i like the words you used.

You had me hooked at the first line. reat poem, very sad and meaninful. good job!! :)

Wow, great poem. so sad but so full of emotion. keep up the good work.

I really loved this. i pictured the entire thing in my head. it was so visual. keep it up!! please read/ comment on some of my poems???? please...

This is an awesome peom...i would have never thought of anything like this before in my life...but i like it! looking forward to hearing more poems from you soon! keep up the great work! 5/5!

Wow... This is powerful... The imagery is a work of art. A very sad work of art but still beautiful. I don't think ive ever read anything like this before two stories with the same ending. It kept my interest and i wondered what would happen next. Another beautiful piece.. 5/5

Wow, such a stroong poem. Very heart felt with an amazing message. Really enjoyed reading it. thank you.

Peace

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