Lonely

by Alejandro Parada   Jun 28, 2008


Gone to another you are
why and when i cannot respond
i loved and was left a scar
we loved and had a great bond

now ur with another
and I'm slowly dieing
u said our love would be 4ever
but now i see u were lying

gone with another gone with another
it cant escape my heart
gone gone with sum other
u took me apart

ma heart has been stolen into Your hands
i cant breath i just sit and weep
i tried to meet all Your demands
but i guess to u i was just a trash heap

Ive been taken and thrown out
into the dark not knowing what to do
i run in circles helpless and shout
wheres the girl that i once knew

the one that helped me through all ma bull shit
the girl that once stood besides me
well i guess she gone she quit
and left me to be lonely

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenny Cortes

    I am speechless... I know how this feels... :'( and reading it makes me realize, I'm not quite over the one i loved... you write so lovely and meaningful!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    I like this one the best.
    The style of the poem and the flow is great and again it is emotive and full of expression.

    It's very sad though, hope everything works out for you!!!

    Aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by The Prince

    Fantastic, very moving

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Gone with another gone with another
    it cant escape am heart
    gone gone with sum other
    u took me apart

    ^^ u=i think what you meant by am heart was im hurt...

    Very well written piece...Flows perfectly and the usage of words are simple that made it an easy read..

    On the other hand, it was filled wit sad emotions...

    Good Job...

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Nothing lasts forever, silly. Love is a double-edged sword with no hilt. Ya almost always got to let it go. Great poem, though. Well writ.
    Honest Luck.

    Sarah

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