Nothing lasts forever, silly. Love is a double-edged sword with no hilt. Ya almost always got to let it go. Great poem, though. Well writ.
Honest Luck.

Sarah

Gone with another gone with another
it cant escape am heart
gone gone with sum other
u took me apart

^^ u=i think what you meant by am heart was im hurt...

Very well written piece...Flows perfectly and the usage of words are simple that made it an easy read..

On the other hand, it was filled wit sad emotions...

Good Job...

Fantastic, very moving

I like this one the best.
The style of the poem and the flow is great and again it is emotive and full of expression.

It's very sad though, hope everything works out for you!!!

Aish
xx

I am speechless... I know how this feels... :'( and reading it makes me realize, I'm not quite over the one i loved... you write so lovely and meaningful!!