Again, this part was just a beautiful as the other. Though, I can't say much of anything different because it was pretty much the same, only from different sides. However, both pieces are wonderful, and both get 5/5's.

So.. 5/5

-Briana.

The way this ties into the other one is amazing.
in my opinion this one is slightly better, it gives the full opinion and background story. the emotions are portrayed much more delicate and available.
some of the lines excede length value for this sort of piece. and the words get repeated a lot. but its good other than those minor things.
fabulously written

Lexie

I love how these poems were pretty similar. which obviously was on purpose. i like how you said in the first one.. do you remember when.. and now you are stating what you remember..very beautiful. i think this one held more emotions and such, mainly because it was coming from your point of view. this one was pretty good.... but again, i encourage you to expand your vocabulary. i know you've done it in this past with your poems.. i'd like to see it again. 5/5.

Really, what I said in my 'part 1' of this poetry series applies to this part two. Pretty much to a T, except there wasn't nearly as much repetition in this part - and therefore I'm strongly favouring this one over the other.

Nicely penned. Once again, a sweet write.