by NinjaGirl
Another simply stunning piece of poetry written by you, David. you present your emotions and thoughts very clearly in this piece, but I don't really believe that you are nothing, because to be nothing, you are something :D |
by June
A very touching write...but I have to agree with above...I don't believe you are nothing either.You gotta be something to write such powerful poetry. |
by Ingrid
David, |
by CrazyCowLady
David, |
by Kalee
It is good to see you posting again, but i really dont like it when you write these types of poems, especially when you write them about yourself. you are not nothing, you are an amazing person who writes amazing poetry. i'm sure a lot of people will agree with me when i say that you are a great person. |
by rachael
You know if you were really nothing you wouldnt even be able to write. i know everyone can get depressed. but some ppl, no matter how bad their situation can still be smiling. ppl choose how you feel most of the time. if you think youre nothing then what do you expect other ppl to think?luckily, ppl who know you know you are really cool. i hope that all made snese |
by ShyandHurt
I know the feeling you talk about and everyone has an "I'm a nobody" moment. You clearly stated what you meant and it blew me away. I really liked this poem. You make it easy to relate to the reader. Very, very good! |
by Michelle18
Good poem.. i've felt this way before.. i dont like the way you have your poem set up.. with all the spacing and everything.. but the poem itself is just amazing. i like it. 5/5 |
by firexdancer
I really liked this. The poem was really good, sort of a twisted love poem, from someone who doesn't like himself. |
by BREEawNUHH
"I am black and I am evil |
by Goran Rahim
Hey Dave |
Your are simply everything to people. |
by Kelsey
This poem is amazingly good. I loved it. |