by Emilia Jun 1, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
For suddenly, I saw you there |
by stephyzz
oh well;....i read some of ur poems, i liked this the most... it was gr8, you've got talent...keep up this good work!! |
by Chuck Aquino
This is so kool, it dont matter if its wrong grammer, as long as it is kool to you, that f@g @ss Sean Allen dont no anything of real poetry. All poetry comes from the heart is beauty, remember that. |
by East Poetry
good poem, i got wrapped up in it. |
by Sean Allen
In the last few lines, it should be 'meant' and 'to', not 'mend' and 'too'. This poem is filled with conflict, and I think that really makes your poem real. It rhymes, but not conspicuously, which makes it much easier to read than poems where the rhyme is forced. |