Every Time you say you Love me

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 28, 2008


Every time you say you love me
I fall apart
Every time you say you miss me
It melts my heart
Every time you call me pretty
I flutter inside
Every time you say sweet things to me
I want to hide
Hide
Hide
Hide

You make me nervous and you know you do
I never thought I'd feel this way for you
So unexpected, but it feels so good to me
I never thought I'd say you hold the other key
You are my friend, but I imagine so much more
You are my favorite one, the one I adore
Adore
Adore
Adore

I want a smile, I want a kiss, I want it all,
but I shouldn't allow my heart to fall
What's there to do with all these thoughts in my head?
How can I not think about all that you've said?
All I know is how I feel about you
and now I don't know what to do
What to do
What to do
You said "I love you."

Everything about you screams unique
Comparing me to you I seem so bleak
I remember when I asked if it was true
Then you confirmed it with "I love you."

Every time you say you love me
I fall apart
Every time you say you miss me
It melts my heart
Every time you call me pretty
I flutter inside
Every time you say sweet things to me
I want to hide
Hide
Hide
Hide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Stop hiding and melting!
    Haahaa, cute poem. Well-written.

    5/5!

    Love
    Snickerrrs

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    First off, I love the repitition of the first stanza, as the last. Secondly, unique format. This is something new. Thirdly, awesome rhyming. I don't know if you kinda lost it in the second stanza, or not.. maybe I read it too fast, I don't know. Lol. Which, leads me to say.. the flow was amazingggg. You let out some pretty true emotions in this poem.. Which is great. Hmm, like Bliss said, it was a little cliche, but we all feel the same when someone tells us "I love you." .. so I'm not gonna say it's bad at all... at least you were showing your true emotions.. I love how you get so easily attached. :] It's not a bad thing, but be careful! Don't fall too hard!! 5/5..

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    *sigh* Beautiful Jen. I could truly feel the emotions I know that this came straight from the heart. I think it was a bit cliche in parts but the realness behind it was so deep that I adore it from beginning to end. He has to read this :]

    I* remember when I asked if it was true
    Then you confirmed it with "I love you."
    ^AHHH my fave part!

    Well done *5/5*

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