by Blissful
*sigh* Beautiful Jen. I could truly feel the emotions I know that this came straight from the heart. I think it was a bit cliche in parts but the realness behind it was so deep that I adore it from beginning to end. He has to read this :] |
First off, I love the repitition of the first stanza, as the last. Secondly, unique format. This is something new. Thirdly, awesome rhyming. I don't know if you kinda lost it in the second stanza, or not.. maybe I read it too fast, I don't know. Lol. Which, leads me to say.. the flow was amazingggg. You let out some pretty true emotions in this poem.. Which is great. Hmm, like Bliss said, it was a little cliche, but we all feel the same when someone tells us "I love you." .. so I'm not gonna say it's bad at all... at least you were showing your true emotions.. I love how you get so easily attached. :] It's not a bad thing, but be careful! Don't fall too hard!! 5/5.. |
Stop hiding and melting! |