Whoo hoo. This is excellent! I love the unique word choice, it's not boring at all. That was impressive! =) Hmm, man. All these feelings bunched up inside you must really trigger some ideas for poetry. Hm? :] Keep it up.. You are doing great. XD 5/5

Love this poem (^_^) 5/5

This whole poem is a bizzare situation. lmao I was getting scared though the whole thing because everything ryhmed and words that I didnt think I knew turns out i did, and damn nice vocabulary.
Never seen a poem like this before you might have tho.
A in originalty.
A+ in ryhming
Perfect in Beat
Keep it up PM me your best poems i wanna see