Comments : Unnamed

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful write... with so few words you spoke so much...
    I wonder why you kept it as unnamed... give it a title.. :)

    "And Don't make me think
    of pink flowers again
    blue lit candles
    as the sun sets."

    ^^ beautiful stanza... I felt as if somebody left you and you dnt want to remember all those moments... the outburst could be felt in those lines...

    good write.. keep writing...