OMG! Your talent is simply worthy of praise for in this one it not only reflects your diverse writing skills but also how easily you capture the readers attention and draw them within this masterpiece.
I truly loved this poem for not only is it something that many can relate to but within it one may find certain answers to the questions that daily stare us blankly in the face.

What a wonderful poem!!...it is strangely written but that is what attracted me..and it was so touchable...I liked it
Good job,keep it up..

Personally, I liked the way you structured this one. It made me jump from one thought to another. Very well written. Beautiful. 5/5