Suicide

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 28, 2008


This is for you Thomas.

Each time you mention wanting to leave
it hurts me and I begin to grieve.
A guy so good, I care so much.
You say the word, my heart I clutch.

Suicide. That's what you want
Your death would forever haunt.
You drive me nuts and tear me apart.
If you were to die you'd crush my heart.

At times you seem to be okay.
Then you want to throw it away.
So many years are left to live.
So many things are left to give.

I wish I could always be there
to cease your death and show I care.
I would give you my heart to keep you whole
and I would try to save your fragile soul.

You're killing me with just the thought.
I'm torn apart, I am distraught.
I might wake up with no more friends.
Especially if your life ends.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SimoneMichelle

    This is a powerful poem.
    it really hit me.
    such a sad poem though.
    filled with so much emotion
    it great the people can express there feelings threw words that mean so much.

    verygoodpoem.
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    NO. NO NO NO NO NO! I CARE ABOUT YOU WAYYYYYY TOO FREAKIN' MUCH TO LET YOU DO THIS TO YOURSELF! :(:(:(:(:'(

    Just talk to me. I'll ALWAYS be here for you. ALWAYS. Hugs and kisses* I care for you Tom.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    :(((( Saaaad.
    My favorite verse is
    'I wish I could always be there
    to cease your death and show I care.
    I would give you my heart to keep you whole
    and I would try to save your fragile soul.'

    It really showed how you're so willing to give yourself o save him. This poem was very well-written, and very true. :(
    Jen+Tom=Foreverrrr. :p

    5/5, for sure!

    Love
    Snickers!

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww. This is sad. I'm not sure if I exactly know who you were referring to in this poem, but I have an idea. But, yeah.. At least this poem shows that you truely care about this person and couldn't live without them if they did take their life. It's a really good poem, and I hope whomever this is addressed to reads it and changes their mind. Hmmm, so poetically, this poem had a very nice flow and everything was excellent. Yippeee. 5/5..

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