Aww. This is sad. I'm not sure if I exactly know who you were referring to in this poem, but I have an idea. But, yeah.. At least this poem shows that you truely care about this person and couldn't live without them if they did take their life. It's a really good poem, and I hope whomever this is addressed to reads it and changes their mind. Hmmm, so poetically, this poem had a very nice flow and everything was excellent. Yippeee. 5/5..

:(((( Saaaad.
My favorite verse is
'I wish I could always be there
to cease your death and show I care.
I would give you my heart to keep you whole
and I would try to save your fragile soul.'

It really showed how you're so willing to give yourself o save him. This poem was very well-written, and very true. :(
Jen+Tom=Foreverrrr. :p

5/5, for sure!

Love
Snickers!

NO. NO NO NO NO NO! I CARE ABOUT YOU WAYYYYYY TOO FREAKIN' MUCH TO LET YOU DO THIS TO YOURSELF! :(:(:(:(:'(

Just talk to me. I'll ALWAYS be here for you. ALWAYS. Hugs and kisses* I care for you Tom.

This is a powerful poem.
it really hit me.
such a sad poem though.
filled with so much emotion
it great the people can express there feelings threw words that mean so much.

verygoodpoem.
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