Oh wow.

i love this poem.. i loved the suspense... i was reading it and i was like ok whats the dang wish lol.. i thought it was great.

and the ending blew me away. i so did not expect it.

great job. 5/5

Interesting view of ones fight with conciousness and own heart. Fighting, almost regretting, the desperate state once reached. Then again, questioning the fact that it may have been even real. Would you have made that choice if it was out of your free will. Finally, ending it with having the power to say that the time has passed for such a fight and it is now time to enjoy the present. Another rare poem with a rare outlook. I liked this one also.

Wow, this poem was amazingly beautiful and wonderful. The rhyme was great; it helped with such a smooth flow. This poem was kind of cool because the poem kind of began with a extremely happy note and then when you said that this guy and you were no longer together or something [I don't remember the exact words!] But, that kind of turned the mood a slight bit, but when you said that you had moved on and that you would find someone else.. [again, I don't remember exact wording, lol].. It set a happy thought yet again, for the reader.. Well done. Great write. 5/5.