by NinjaGirl Jun 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Memories |
This was... well... brilliant. I wasn't expecting this, and I was pleasantly surprised. It honestly was like an ongoing battle within yourself, and you displayed that perfectly. Excellent. :] A unique idea and well expressed. |
by David
Need to edit it a bit more but this was really deep, the repetitiveness really allowed this poem to flow and assert its point across all that more effectively. great job. |