Comments : Why We Will Never Be

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    I truly enjoyed reading this poem. the rhythm was so clear and i would say natural. my fav line is:

    I took a slow and steady pace.
    You threw it all back in my face.

    short question add something special to the poem, make it more emotonal:
    like here:
    I had no chance. Why do you lie?
    and here:
    I gave the effort. Understood?

    the way you express your emotions is mwhat i like about this poem. there is no hysterics, it seems quite smooth, but still so sincere and heart-felt!
    good job,
    5/5