I truly enjoyed reading this poem. the rhythm was so clear and i would say natural. my fav line is:
I took a slow and steady pace.
You threw it all back in my face.
short question add something special to the poem, make it more emotonal:
like here:
I had no chance. Why do you lie?
and here:
I gave the effort. Understood?
the way you express your emotions is mwhat i like about this poem. there is no hysterics, it seems quite smooth, but still so sincere and heart-felt!
good job,
5/5