Thats really good. it got me a lil cofused, lol (slow brain:) but then i was like wow. 5/5

~tia

First off thanku so much for the comment on my poem =]

this poem was great it moved me, I luved the emotion..made me really think about stuff .
great job. 5/5

-Angie

This poem is beautiful, fill of truth, raw emotion and power behind each word. amazing.
--lovedroughtmelody