Left outside the door [Pantoum]

by WaitAutumn   Jun 29, 2008


I'm bond to the life
You chose to leave behind
Alone to confront the shadows
Somewhere nowhere to be found

You chose to leave behind
All those that cherished you
Somewhere nowhere to be found
Deeply hiding your heart

All those that cherished you
Couldn't understand why
Deeply hiding your heart
Leaving by the door your secrets

Couldn't understand why
Was it my fault you left?
Leaving by the door your secrets
Will you ever let me in?

-never believed in forever-

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is a very profaound piece. I especially like the line - Leaving by the door your secrets. This is so true, we share our lives with loved ones and that includes secrets. A fantastic way to describe intamacies shared.

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is a very profaound piece. I especially like the line - Leaving by the door your secrets. This is so true, we share our lives with loved ones and that includes secrets. A fantastic way to describe intamacies shared.

    Well done

    Michael