Comments : Left outside the door [Pantoum]

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is a very profaound piece. I especially like the line - Leaving by the door your secrets. This is so true, we share our lives with loved ones and that includes secrets. A fantastic way to describe intamacies shared.

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is a very profaound piece. I especially like the line - Leaving by the door your secrets. This is so true, we share our lives with loved ones and that includes secrets. A fantastic way to describe intamacies shared.

    Well done

    Michael