I haven't not been able to do the same as you <------- That line should be "I haven't been able to do the same as you" or "I have not been able to do the same as you", you can't have the words haven't and not. I think it was just a typo, though. Hehe. :] |
by Sharon
Good poem and i know exactly how you feel. I still love my ex and i'll have guy friends but once i find out they're interested i just feel bad because i can't feel anything for them when my heart belongs to my ex. |
Thank you guys for all your feedback! I really appriciate it and it helps me to know what to imporve and what to keep :] |