Wow this is a great piece......
full for life expression, i do imagine how does the book look like while the win blows on it tenderly.....
well...... what a good write... keep it going
bye:)

I really liked this. It was very well written. And I quite enjoyed the rhyming.

5/5

-Briana

Nice style of writing a poem. I find this one interesting. It flows very well and meaningful too. Good job!

This was interesting and unique. I really enjoyed it. At times, I felt like the flow was a little jumpy here and there, particularly since you had two-word first lines for every stanza. However, I thought this was a very beautiful and inspiring piece. It had a gentle and hopeful atmosphere.

Nicely done.

Simply written with basic words we use everyday... but it managed to carry out the message... it's nice the only thing missing is rhythm but it's fine coz you weren't exactly trying to write a poem that wud rhyme... this poem has a nice idea. =] good poem btw

This is so perfect and true...The idea was interesting and I think u showed it in a very good way..It couldn't be any better...I really loved it..
Good job,keep it up5/5...

This is a wonderful poem and so true. This poem holds alot of hope. Wonderful job. 5/5

You did a really good job on this. it was filled with descriptions, and was really interesting. it was very inspiring.

Another good poem.
It flowed well and the message was clear.

You are a good writer.
Keep it up 5/5

I liked this a lot. It really shows how everybody is in charge of their own life :)