Thousand miles apart

by beby   Jun 29, 2008


It started with hello,
it started with a smile,
it started with a wink,
it started with a talk,
it started with a beach,
it started with a long walk,

stars, moon, and beach were watching us,
we were stranger to each other,
we came from different directions,
we are totally different,
but, u gave something to me to remember,
u make my heart beats faster every time i remember u,
i always wanna cry whenever i remember you,
but, every time i do, i stop and remember you're saying
dint cry, because u r strong girl to ME
it helps me to hold on..

sometimes i cant help it, but i always hold on
in what we always promised,
maybe we are far apart, but we will stay closed
in our heart
n remember Bebe, even we are apart, remember
that u always have my heart

i never thought it would be this hard,
i thought just knowing you for awhile,
it would be easy to move on, but no
its not that easy.. we both know its
killing us...

we tried to move on, but we just pretending,
we play our part, and we know our story has ended,
we just dint want to close the door that we had opened,
and we just dint want to take the different route,
is it me or you to blame for not stopping from the start,
or should we blame fate?

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  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    This poem portrayed the stages and emotions of love very well. I enjoyed it, though I do have a suggestion:

    Typically using abbreviations such as "u" and "&" and such are looked down upon. For a lot of people, especially those who do not use these abbreviations, it makes it harder to read the poem, and throws off the rhythm. If you cut down the abbreviations and use "you" instead of "u" and "and" instead of &, everyone, even the ones who typically use those abbreviations, will be able to read it a lot better.

    Great read overall! Nicely done.

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