I really like it........ur really good keep going with more poems

Great poem. It really paints a picture in my head. The part that really sticks in my head is:

My black wings burnt and broken
As i watched the fire soar

Nice job. Honest Luck

Sarah

Awesome poem!!..I loved it a lott..
It really expresses a deep sadness...
Good job,keep it up...

Woww! this poem was wisely written and had a great flow, i loved every word!! it was so different than anything else i've ever really read. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.