Comments : A Prayer for my Sisters

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow. This was very emotional for me, because I have two sisters. We don't really show that much love for eachother, but I love them a lot. The fact that you put this into a prayer made it even more emotional, because it was like I was actually praying to God while I was reading it, very personal.

    Sometimes, what we want to say to other people can't be spoken out loud, but writing it down is a good way to get it off your chest. Your sisters are lucky to have you, your love for them is unmistakeable.

    I don't want to pick apart this poem, because it's more that just pretty words, it's real. I can tell this poem means a lot to you, and that makes it perfect in my eyes. So great job.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by fearose

    I don't even believe in God and this almost made me start crying. Great job. You expressed your feelings in a religious, yet genuine way.