by adroit
Wow. What a bittersweet poem. I know it should seem sad, but it gives this overall message of well-being and true, sincere happiness. Excellent writing. Honest Luck |
by linkhorizon
Great poem. i especially enjoyed reading the last few lines. everything happens for a reason and maybe this person wasn't it. better things will come your way, you'll see. |
by Rachel RTVW
I am not going to critique this as a poem as it reads more like prose. It does read beautifully as that. |
by June
Very heart touching ,and I am sure there are many who have met that someone whom have touched their hearts in that way. |
by Tina Marie
Loved it, you are good at writing poems hun. i think you are from the ones i read so far. looking forward to read other poems from you |
by J u l e s
Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading this poem. I feel though that what happened to you may not of been the best but to feel joy you must feel sorrow. and your sorrow will bring you joy, and you will find some one for you loves |
A sad poem but i liked the positive way you ended it,you seem to be quite a strong person.Well written |
by The Prince
Truly honest and fantastic sentiment. |
by P00ki3B3ar
Very sentiment i likeee! ;]] |
Nice, i do like this one. and i looked at a few others they are really good. |
WOW THIS IS BEAUTIFUL |
Happy in a sad sort of way..... |
by Snowdrop
Gorgeous, much like a fairy tale. :) |