"Now I just now I have to follow this"

"now" should be "know"

"After all I've been through, I'm still not done"

I think the comma I added in makes it seem less of a run-on sentence. agree?

beautiful poem. sad. i hope this is not your life. if it is i feel for you.

5/5

Thank you. I edited the 'now'. :)

Well, it tells you a lot about what I've been through, but everything is changing now and I can definetely say that I'm much better now.