Listens to rain smack on soft adobe,
she doesn't understand why the rain never stays.

^^ Eek. I love these lines. Rain is so comforting to me for some reason. I wish it'd just rain all the time. But I guess we'd have a flood then. >.>

Anyways, I really liked this one. I think it has a lot more meaning than I picked up on though. Something really deep underlying suck simple words. Or maybe it doesn't, who knows? That's the great thing about poems.

Great job, Gabby!

Keep writing!
Cayce