Oooh goody another rain poem. ^.^ Haha. I must read it! By the way.. how do you write so many poems in one day? o.o

Okay okay, I've got something from this poem, but I could be comepletely wrong. I think "summer's dying" is a metaphore for like innocence dying. Like.. becoming an adult, or at least leaving your childhood, because when I think og summer I think about my childhood, swimming and playing with my friends.. so when you said summer's dying.. it just made me think of that.

And the rain falls on.

^^ Oh my gosh. I never thought such a simple line could bring such an impact, but the way you set it up was amazing. It's now officially stuck in my mind. Haha.

Another wonderful write! x]

Keep writing!
Cayce