Comments : Beautiful Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Aaaaaaaaahh! This is so nice =] It reads very plesently (I don't know if that's the correct spelling, but I don't care xD)
    The only thing, every stanza has a nice flow, but at this part;

    "I sat you down and asked what's wrong
    I saw it in your eyes
    I kept you happy, I kept you strong
    Like a sunshine in the sky"

    "like a sunshine in the sky" is a little akward, but that's ok xD
    NICE POEM =D
    5/5 again ^^,