Wow this is impressive.. i love the beginning .. its so strong.. and girls always think they have to look their best for a guy ... (including me) lol..

but gosh i loved this poem. you ended it well too. maybe capitazlize your I's is all that is wrong. other than that well done. 5/5

A few words.
i couldn't say this right even when I tried. You did this amazingly.
i really felt the pang of guilt that could be caused if someone read this. like, i felt this way before, but i couldn't say it politically correct, or correct whatsoever. the only negative thing i have to say is it seems like you babble and ramble a little bit. I think it goes with the strict structure reference to loose flow. I think it could be a bit more limited and tight fitting to get more of the objective pain and knowing across. But still, WOW. this is amazing!
i would read it again, but i might cry.
that is saying a very good thing about this.
fantabulistic!

Lexie

A pretty good poem overall. the format of the poem was unique.. the emotions were true and real and very clear. um, i did noticed you don't capitolize your i's. just like i am right now. lol. but, you should probably do that. that's one of the most important words to always remember to capitolize. uhhhmm, what else? first line, i realize you made makeup into two words.. just join make and up together. :] ahh, overall areally good. 5/5.

Really good poem, although i think the transition from talking about the make-up to talking about the cutting was a little bit rough.

Any way over all i think that this poem was very well written, it had good flow, although again you lost it close to the end.

4/5
Good work

Wow, this poem is absolutely breath taking. The emotion in this is very powerful and you used every word perfect. Although, the flow/ stanzas didn't really stand out much because it's kind of mixed up a bit. It's a very beautiful piece though. Great job!

.:CiNdY:.

I usually dont like poems that dont rhyme...but thsi one got to me.i like it =]

I must say, good job. Usually I detest poems about cutting and the whole charade and what not, but thats usually because the people who write them are just trying to be cool or whatever not realizing that its a bit of a problem, but you've put emotion behind it, and I actually liked it! once again, good job.