Comments : Horrible Haiku

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    LOL.......should have posted this in the humor section........didn't think it that bad though.......:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tony

    Not really sure why but I quite liked this. I agree with another comment, maybe a more natural home for this poem would be in the funny section.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    I love it! It put a smile on my face, probly the best thing i've read all day!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    For some reason I dislike Haikus and find them very limiting and mine is no exception. thanks for all the private messages on this one. I agree it is hideous...

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    LOL. I simply do not have the talent to be able to pull these off. Actually I have no desire to either. Well at least you have kept the syllable count correct. I have attempted these before and have never done them justice. Just as they have never served me for anything but stress trying to create one.

    Thanks for the humor,
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I found this somewhat humorous my dear.

    Wonderful haha :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I tried to make the use of only two words for this "Horrible Haiku". I agree with many people and their dislike for these types of poems. Like I said earlier - I don't know why but I find most Haiku's pretty hideous. There are some good ones - but they are hard to find. Most people spend more time on the syllable count and forget the rest. Just like I did with this one. It has nothing to do with nature.