by gracey grey
LOL.......should have posted this in the humor section........didn't think it that bad though.......:) |
by Tony
Not really sure why but I quite liked this. I agree with another comment, maybe a more natural home for this poem would be in the funny section. |
I love it! It put a smile on my face, probly the best thing i've read all day! |
by Tom Swart
For some reason I dislike Haikus and find them very limiting and mine is no exception. thanks for all the private messages on this one. I agree it is hideous... |
LOL. I simply do not have the talent to be able to pull these off. Actually I have no desire to either. Well at least you have kept the syllable count correct. I have attempted these before and have never done them justice. Just as they have never served me for anything but stress trying to create one. |
I found this somewhat humorous my dear. |
by Tom Swart
I tried to make the use of only two words for this "Horrible Haiku". I agree with many people and their dislike for these types of poems. Like I said earlier - I don't know why but I find most Haiku's pretty hideous. There are some good ones - but they are hard to find. Most people spend more time on the syllable count and forget the rest. Just like I did with this one. It has nothing to do with nature. |