Haha. Wow. This is.. interesting. Actually, I thought the flow was really good. And I liked the rhyming. Very well written.

5/5

-Briana

Wow...i love the flow and the rhyming in it, and it was very sexy and graphic i could picture everything while i read! Good Job

Damn i love that

Really enjoyed reading this one. Honesty and innocence seemed to be between the lines ... and it was so heartfelt!

Hmmmm...quite good actually.

I love this poem...
i like how you made your ending hehe...

That was interesting. The ending is very good. I liked it

I love this piece I love the flow and the way you ended it your words were chosen carefully and fitted perfectly I don't feel like the is anything here that could be improved.

This was so sensual. i loved it. another great work 5/5

I love this poem. its amazing. no really it is. i could picture every stanza in my mind. good job. the ryhme flow was awsome. keep it up.
5/5