Comments : Life

  • 16 years ago

    by ApacheRose

    This is nice it was incredible vocab wise or structure or anything but I felt the emotion and it was real deep. keep up writing maybe smooth out the flow of things over all though only suggestion.

  • 16 years ago

    by ApacheRose

    Wasn't

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    I love it. great job. 5/5 =]

    ~tia

    ps--im happy she got all better