Comments : I am dying without you

  • 16 years ago

    by IBRAHIM DWIDAR

    Wonderful feeling Noor, may Allah gather u soon isa with ur lover

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A lovely desription of a sad heart that misses its' companion.

    I like how you analyse the minute and seemingly insignificant, breathing life to it that many don't notice.

    Well done

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Good one..... sadness lurking around the words in this poem.... keep it up