Comments : First sight

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Good poem but question in this stanza

    I walked in the room, i saw you there
    Saw your eyes and your blonde hair
    i thought to myself "now hes orrite"
    [ do you mean alright?]
    "decent looks and a decent height

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    I love this poem-It is now on my favourite list, noone could have described'Love at first sight better'-5/5