My week

by halie   Jun 30, 2008


Monday,
is the day i miss you
Tuesday,
is the day i think of you
Wednesday,
is the day i wonder why
Thursday,
is the day i cry
Friday, and Saturday,
are the days that i cut

cut for your love,
cut for your attention
the marks on my arms
get deeper and deeper
the blood gets thicker and thicker

only to think,
its cause of you
that by Sunday night i wont have another week of anything to go through

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was deep and beautiful. very powerful. i love the way you wrote it, it was unique. job well done. 5/5.

    -ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That was deep, but at the same time very beutiful because it shows emotion of how you feel toward this person. like: "cut for your love,
    cut for your attention
    the marks on my arms
    get deeper and deeper
    the blood gets thicker and thicker"

    ^^that was just a great description of how you feel^^ grreat job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Can Love Last

    Wow...tht is deep...but very good! I really like this! 5/5

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