by Mister 47
Quite a peace of poem mmm new topics and style , i love it !!! althought i wish you take care more fo teh rhyming in it you can not blame me since i am pianist ,but hey you are too so you should do too |
Oh, goodness. I envy your ability to write some mind-blowing pieces. This was really good, but of course another sad love poem. I like happy love poems, but I can deal with the sad ones as well. This was explained so very well, and everything was just put together so well. I loved your title! Wow, I'm not really sure how you come up with those. They are really good. Again, I tried my hardest to find any flaws in your poem.. but I failed to do so. I can't tell you to change anything in your poems.. they are simply amazing. You have improved so much, I think you've mastered poetry as far as I can see. Another exxxcellent poem. I enjoyed it soooo very much, my dear. <3 5/5 |
Wow, it's unbelievable how much I could relate to this poem. |
by JD Irby
This poem is probably one of the best piece of literature i have read in a long time. IT was in an odd rhyme scheme, or maybe i am just really tired. but i like the 4th line of every stanza. It was an all out great poem,, the story, the meaning and just all over greatness. 5/5 |
----------> Actual Title (Too Long): "Breathing Requires Oxygen; Love is Just a Bonus That I Can't Seem to Live Without" |
by Melpomene
"Breathing Requires Oxygen; Love is Just a Bonus That I Can't Seem to Live Without" |
by Blissful
I swear to you the title can be a poem itself. Wonderful. |
by ABake
About time I got to this poem eh Mindy? Haha :D But yeah, I don't think I have commented any of your work before so I need to let you know how I comment. I go stanza by stanza, as I read them. Just a heads up ^.^ |
by iTdOnTmAtTeR
Okay...can this piece talk more about how im feeling? damn, " It seems that my surroundings have been enthralled by you: |