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WOW shellaine!! This is so deep and beautiful! Although I do recommend making your stanzas a bit more "together"..but thats prolly just your creativity showing :D Its beautiful darlin!

I can't deny that the pain
sometimes becomes so surreal
and takes over my mind...
They say that
I need to be strong
the fear is only in my mind.

^^This is a really sweet and deep line..great work!^^

This is my sweet sacrifice
I've given up on holding on
until help arrived
I've gone and chosen the
sharpest of knives.

^^Oh I really love this line! I really like your word choice in this line because its original..bt in your own way! Thats what I love about this line :)^^

The blood flows out like
a river
my soul is going to the devil
and will soon be delivered.
I have made a pact
now... theres no turning back...

^^Oh wow...I love this line too...it def shows your creativity in it...Excellent!^^

I sealed it with the knifes kiss
leaving me in eternal bliss
for I have escaped the fears in my head
and have realized...
Now that its to late...
I realize I am the fears
I tried so hard to escape...

^^Oofta...nvm...THIS line is my favorite because its revealing and deep...I'm happy to see that you put that much of yourself in into this! I gave it a 5 :) Amazing work!!!!!!
Take care,
Loni

Very emotionally strong poem. Some lines are very good. Nice one.

This poem blew me away!!
it was beautiful yet so so sad.
i loved every word. you were truthful and expressed yeself very well.
job well done.
keep it up!

This poem was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was very sad and deep.
It had so much emotion and many people can relate to it! This was such a great piece!!!!!!!!!
definetly 5/5
Great work!!!!!!!!
:)

Very sharp twist of emotion and self realization. Brought a lot of things from my own life into perspective in a sudden flash of memories. The rising emotions suddenly faced with reality but it's too late. I really liked this piece. Thanks for the read.