New Beginnings

Sad to know your story but I should say that your poem is well-written. I gave it topnotch marks :)

tc and be hopeful

Fsams

This was a very powerful piece of poetry, even with the poor wording. you put a lot of strength into this piece, making it amazing.
i agree with some of the above comments that the wording was poor and in need to be re-worded, but i also agree with Lizaveta that it didn't really seem to be a finished piece.
the flow, however, was great :)

4/5

btw, good luck with the contest :)

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

The emotions that you express on this poem are very strong.
"It's gonna be hard to move on,
But my strength will keep me going."
loved that line because i've had to rely on myself to move on from someone i loved, too.
the flow could have been a bit smoother. but other than that, very nice job. beautifully written. (:
-Channa-

I think this is a strong poem making the male relize what he has choosen to give away. i feel there is meaning in this poem. Men should be afraid of how strong women are! great job 5/5

This was a terrific poem. It really portrayed how you felt and the fact that you kept moving on even though he kicked you out of his life shows how strong women really are. This read more like a story than a poem. So I gave it 4/5