My Eternity

This is short and sweet. i don't think how much power this poem has with the topic of love. you explained it so well. even if it doesn't rhyme. great job 5/5

I love this poem also. It really shows emotion, shows the reader how much you care for this guy you just met. But, at the same time, your style is a little unfamiliar to me. It's more like you are talking that writing. So 4/5, excellent poem. !!

This is so sweet, but seemed kinda common. sweet, sincere, but nothing to catcg attention and to make me go "wow" or "awwww".
well, the "eternity" idea is nice... this poem expresses your emotion, but it's not unque in poetic aspect.
4/5

This was beautiful and very cute. you did another excellent job expressing your feelings for this person.. and how amazing they are and everything. overall, it was okay. maybe another one of those poems that was too simple. it seemed like anything anyone could say about someone they love. 4/5

Aw. This was so sweet. I loved how truly heartfelt it was. Although, I do wish it was longer, because you did such a great job on what you did write.

Absolutely beautiful.

5/5

-Briana