Just A Little Deeper

I agree with all the above WOW!!!!!!
I can relate to every word and line and I think that everyone can relate to this in a time in their life where everything just abandons them, they emotions collapse, everyone blames but doesn't clearly understand you or why you do things the way they do, they ignore you and delete your own self worth at the same time.
I like the use of ellipses as it keeps the reader in suspense and keeps the flow easily segregated and meaningful keeping the reader interested.
In times like these you need to find that hope that is stored within yourself that knows the truth that life tries to hide, you need to push forward and stay true to yourself and firm and not let life get to you in the way that it hurts.
Amazing write it reminds me of my favourite poet of all times.
Keep up the awesome work
5.5

I am feeling just like that now. Meh.

Thank you for the poetic comment.

When it's high time, summary arrives. In the nick of time, truth is known. Him who cares shall not desert you. Keep moving forward, lest you lose.

Wow what a sad poem... Very deep! It tells us what people can be like.... Very sad but emotional poem 5/5